Alexandra_Holland (Mage) - [Entropy 1]

Character's Name: Alexandra_Holland
Character's Race: Mage
What are you applying for?:Entropy 1
What's your current rating of the state you're applying for?: Entropy 0 >> Entropy 1
Explain how you've earned the upgrade: It was a lonely night, when she wanted to visit her mentor in Los Santos, for guidance, she meets her mentor at the house. Alexandra asked about magick, the Entropy study of chaos, luck, and morality, but the mentor didn't give it so easily. Mentor gave her a task to do it mentor and Alexandra the same practice of witchcraft. She had to get some wood from the sawmill, for Quintessence, it was pretty hard since Alex doesn't have money, to pay off
so she just stole that, from the local sawmill without get noticing since she has arcane most people ignore her presence successfully. brings backlogs to her mentor, as the mentor promises to teach Alexandra the basics of understanding Entropy, such as detecting entropy spells, and lies, it pretty feel goes with her paradigm, and so, she prepares for the world ending, by studying entropy. She thanks her mentor for moving back to Dilimore.


Last edited by Andzelika on 19/1/2023, 14:52; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Chaged story.)

The story seems fine for doing what the mentor asked but..

You're going to want to cover what Alexandra learnt about Entropy and the applications, and how she forged her way.


Pending for the changes to be made

Changed.

Well good,

Now the thing is, generally, the outlook of the sphere is what your character sees the sphere to be, you simply state the uses which is well, pretty much done after learning.

What I heavily suggest is that, you properly forge a way and see through your character's eyes regarding a sphere, I understand that Mage is not anyone's splat, it's quite complex and hard to understand, but if you kept the above mentioned advice in mind, you can do wonders, all it takes is proper attachment and a thought process akin to a witch/wizard.

Accepted, though I expect more the next time!